Miss Geneva spied on you today. Circling the pond and coasting past the scraggly
old pecan by her barn. Over and over again. She said, your sugar skulls fluttered
on the breeze.
Like she’s proud you’ve accumulated so many god-awful hankies for your
bike. The one around your head looks hideous too—paisley clashes with everything.
Including my tormented nerves. You’re not fooling anyone with that bandanna.
Everyone knows there’s no cancer, honey. It doesn’t exist, except in
her schemes and your delusions. Just like there was no baby last summer either.
Grief made your hair fall out. Now, that sly old woman claims God never gives us
more than we can handle. The nerve! Let me be succinct: her platitude is
baloney. Totally unbiblical. And she’s no Christian. You think
I’m biased, but here’s perfect proof she hates me. My darling husband,
your beloved daddy, his life cut short by a stupid war—that was her
doing, filling his head and heart with patriotic insanity. And she wants to steal
your life from me, too!
She’s bad news, like I’ve said a thousand times. But truly, you’re
a moth to flame. Deaf and blind just like your daddy was. I can see only one way
to save you from the route of her evil. She’s the cancer, honey, but your
mama knows the cure: a little accident in the woods. Shooting squirrels for supper.
Thank goodness your grandma’s too big to miss, even with my tremors.
Each year, the String-of-10 Contest held by Flash Fiction Chronicles
challenges writers to use at least four out of ten prompt words in a story of 250
or fewer words (not including the title). An aphorism is provided for inspiration
but need not be used in the story. The String-of-10 SEVEN contest took place in
February, 2015 and included these prompt words:
- scraggly
- pecan
- route
- succinct
- accumulate
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- handle
- bias
- exist
- coast
- handkerchief
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The aphorism was, “We cannot teach people anything; we can only help them
discover it within themselves.” —Galileo Galilei
While perusing Facebook, I learned about the 2015 String-of-10 Contest from Meg
Tuite, fiction editor of The Santa Fe Literary Review. As guest judge for
the contest, she was helping to spread the word. Intrigued, I checked out the contest
guidelines at Flash Fiction Chronicles, which is where I discovered their
style prompts. Not one word, or even three or four, but a list of ten!
And a new list several times a week, offered by FCC as a way to prime the creative
pump.
I remember thinking, what a smart strategy by the editors. It seemed a fine way
to help generate new stories to consider for their sister publication, Every
Day Fiction. My next thought: Hmmm, is it really possible to include all ten
words (seamlessly that is) in a story which is only 250 words long? Well, of
course, there was only one way to find out.
The story that resulted was inspired by the image of a scraggly old pecan tree from
my childhood, and did indeed include all ten prompt words. I emailed “Target
Practice” to my colleague, the poet Jack Cooper (and one of KYSO
Flash’s Contributing Editors), and suggested that he enter the contest
as well—but having learned about it earlier than I did, he had already
submitted his own story. Which also included all ten prompt words.
It was clear right away that Cooper’s story was more likely to win than mine
was, and with excitement I wished him best of luck. How wonderful to learn a few
weeks later that my intuition was right on, that “Options” had indeed
been chosen as first-place winner. That stellar story is republished here in KF-3
(along with my story, at Cooper’s urging) to illustrate the kick-starting
creative power of a random string of ten words.
is a pen name for Clare MacQueen, who is Editor-in-Chief and webmaster for KYSO
Flash, and has also served as copy editor and webmaster for Serving House
Journal since its creation five years ago.
Her short fiction and essays have appeared in Firstdraft, Bricolage, and
Serving House Journal, as well as the anthologies, Best New Writing
2007 and Winter Tales II: Women on the Art of Aging. She won an Eric
Hoffer Best New Writing Editor’s Choice Award for nonfiction and was nominated
twice for a Pushcart Prize in nonfiction.